Minggu, 28 Oktober 2012

Chart Analysis II

Make paragraph by using chart
This is a tutorial about information in a pie chart for the IELTS academic writing. There are two charts, which is bowed a pie or cake with several slices. This chart shows us the information, which in a pie chart. It usually contains the main features and comparison of each slice.
            Based on the chart (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMurHxzKeyI&feature=related), talks about two countries, which have destinations countries, they are Australia and New Zealand. For Australia has three major destination country, which were visited, they are Japan with percentage value about 32.9%, the second one is China with percentage value about 24.6%, and the third one is Korea with 13.85% value of percentage. For New Zealand, three countries that become destination countries, they are Australia, United State (US), and Japan. Each country has 37.8%, 20.2%, 16.7% value of destination countries.
            The largest percentage of New Zealand was Australia with percentage value about 37.8%, but it was disproportionately with Australia, it was not to be New Zealand as the main destination country. In other hand, the third largest country of New Zealand was visited namely Japan with 32.9%, but Japan was the largest destination country in Australia. Besides that, Australia and New Zealand had the same destination countries, they are China and United State, and they gave proportions and making clear contrast. It was be able to be looked that India was a significant and important destination for Australia’s good, but not for New Zealand.

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7 komentar:

  1. After read this conclusion, I think this is a very clear and understandable paragraph.
    keep writing, dude!

    BalasHapus
  2. your identifying of paragraph is understandable...

    BalasHapus
  3. your paragraphs help me in understanding the chart....

    BalasHapus
  4. welldone......

    Cment back !!!!

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    BalasHapus