Make paragraph by using chart
This
is a tutorial about information in a pie chart for the IELTS academic writing.
There are two charts, which is bowed a pie or cake with several slices. This
chart shows us the information, which in a pie chart. It usually contains the
main features and comparison of each slice.
Based on the chart (http://www.youtube.com/ watch?v=YMurHxzKeyI&feature=rel ated), talks
about two countries, which have destinations countries, they are Australia and
New Zealand. For Australia has three major destination country, which were
visited, they are Japan with percentage value about 32.9%, the second one is
China with percentage value about 24.6%, and the third one is Korea with 13.85%
value of percentage. For New Zealand, three countries that become destination
countries, they are Australia, United State (US), and Japan. Each country has
37.8%, 20.2%, 16.7% value of destination countries.
The largest percentage of New
Zealand was Australia with percentage value about 37.8%, but it was
disproportionately with Australia, it was not to be New Zealand as the main
destination country. In other hand, the third largest country of New Zealand
was visited namely Japan with 32.9%, but Japan was the largest destination
country in Australia. Besides that, Australia and New Zealand had the same
destination countries, they are China and United State, and they gave
proportions and making clear contrast. It was be able to be looked that India
was a significant and important destination for Australia’s good, but not for
New Zealand.
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